书面表达十一(综合训练五福州市三月质检竞选班长)9.pptVIP

假如你是杨方，你要竞选班长(class president)，请根据以下内容写一篇竞选演讲词。1. 你认为自己具备什么条件可以胜任班长工作？2. 如果当选你会为班级同学做些什么？注意：词数120个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2.本文内容要点： 1） 个人所具备的竞选班长的优越条件 2) 如果当选你打算要为班级做什么 ，即竞选目标 3）表决心，拉票，表示感谢 3.段落层次： 根据三个内容要点，可分三段来写。 4.注意点：该文体写作应朴实，真诚(sincere)，条理清楚，同时，话语要具有感染力（powerful），煽动性，让听众（选民）信服你，感受到你的真诚及能力。 范文 My name is Yang Fang. I’m glad to have this opportunity to tell you why you should vote for me as class president. （开头语，引出话题） Being a student myself, firstly, I will create an academic atmosphere so that everyone in our class will improve their studies. For those students who are falling behind, I will find ways to help them to catch up.Secondly, I will serve as a bridge between the teachers and us students. Finally, I will arrange parties to relax ourselves. （本段具体描述你的竞选目标： 1create an academic atmosphere 2 serve as a bridge 3 arrange parties to relax ourselves ；描述时 分别用了firstly ，Secondly， Finally ，使得层次清晰，逻辑有序） I believe I am the right person for this post and I hope to have your support and vote. Thank you! （结束语简明扼要，态度真诚，自信） 典型错误 I’m a kind and outgoing people.(I’m a …person.) I want to serve for my class.（serve + n.） I have a kind-heart . ( a kind heart) I’ll make the environment more clean.(cleaner) I also good at sports.(I am good at…) Creat harmony atmosphere (harmonious atmosphere) I’ll spare no pains to do things what will benefit our class.(…things that will benefit our class) As you known….(As you know…) I’ll hard working and try my best.(work hard) I’ll help you when you have difficult.(difficulty) I get well with them and they are like me.(they all like me) 要点1 I love our class. I enjoy class daily work. I’m good at communicating with people and it can close the distance between teachers and students. A good relationship can make it easier for me to manage our class well. I like to be helpful . Whenever you need my help, I’m always there. I have enough confidence that I can run our class perfectly because of my rich