2012广一模 basic writing.pptVIP

* 海丰仁荣中学刘先琴 基础写作的推荐步骤： 一、认真审题 二、归纳、整合信息点 三、确定短语和句型 四、连词成句 五、组句成篇 六、检查修改 （分配5句话的信息） students/they 说明文（调查类） 人称： 文体： 一般过去时 一般将来时 时态: 连词成句 词汇表达---sentence 1 1、最近: 2、进行调查: 3、在368名中学生中: 4、关于: 5、春节活动: recently; in recent days carried out/did/made a survey among 368 middle school students on; about; concerning the issue/topic of activities during 2012 Spring Festival how they spent 2012 Spring Festival what they did during 2012 Spring Festival 词汇表达---sentence 2,3 1、30%: 2、陪父母走访亲友: 3、与同学或父母外出旅游: 4、在家做功课: 5、占据: 6、表达“对比 ”: 7、表达“递进”: 8、过渡句: 30% of the students/them visited relatives and friends (together) with their parents; accompanied their parents visiting... went travelling with... stayed at home doing homework; did homework at home took up; made up; accounted for; occupied while; compared with besides; moreover; furthermore According to the survey, ... The survey showed that... As can be seen from the survey, ... 连词成句 ① 30% of the students... while 25% of them... Besides, 45% students just... ② Compared with 30% of the students who visited..., 25% of them ... ③ The students who visited ... made up 30%, while those who went ... accounted for 25% 词汇表达---sentence 4 1、过渡句： 2、多数人： 3、开心： 4、收到很多压岁钱： 5、部分人: 6、不开心： 7、功课太多： 没有娱乐时间： After the Spring Festival,... When asked how they felt about the... When asked their feelings about the... most of; the majority of felt happy/delighted; enjoyed it; expressed their happiness/satisfaction because they got/were given a lot of lucky money because of the lucky money they got some of; the minority of felt unhappy; complained 7、功课太多： 没有娱乐时间： They had so much homework that they had no time to enjoy themselves. for entertainment because of the homework they were given, leaving them no time... 连词成句 8、表达对比、转折 while/ but 词汇表达---sentence 5 1、期望 2、少写作业 3、多些先闲暇时间 (sincerely) hope that; express the hope that expect that; what they expect is that look forward to