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高一英语写作训练（一）讲评 高考笔试部分试卷结构和题型 题序 题型 题量 赋分 时间/分 I 语言知识及运用 第一节：完形填空 15 30 25 第二节：语法填空 10 15 10 II 阅读 第一节：阅读理解 20 40 40 第二节：信息匹配 5 10 5 III 总计 52 135 120 写作 第一节：基础写作 第二节：读写任务 1 15 10 1 25 30 写作要求： 要求考生根题示 进行书面表达。考生应能： 1)清楚，连贯地传递信息，表达意思 2)有效运用所学语言知识 第一节：基础写作 命题规律： 形式采用中文提纲/表格 常考应用和说明文 内容要点完全给出： 只能使用五个句子： 三条评分标准： 没有设开放性要点，考生不可随意发表个人意见或观点。 尽量用到并列句，复合句，非谓语动词短语、介词短语等来帮助表达全部内容。 句子结构准确 信息内容完整 篇章结构连贯 一、 书写潦草，卷面涂改。 二、 自由发挥自己的观点，字数超出太多。 三、 审题不仔细，信息内容不完整，缺少要点。 一、 句式错误。 二、 单词拼写错误。 四、词性使用错误 三、动词形式错误 五、主谓不一致 六、代词使用错误 七、名词单复数，可数与不可数 八、标点符号与大小写 一、句式错误 I disagree with your think. Friends in our life a play an important role. No matter the distance, we are willing to with our friends share joys. you disagree with sb disagree to sth disagree on sth Friends play an important role in our life. No matter how far the distance is, we are willing to share joys with our friends. 一、句式错误 When we encounter difficulties or frustrated, our friends help . You should treat your friends like you are treated by your friends . Don’t believe person who easy to leave you. Don’t believe in the person who leaves you easily. When we are in trouble or feel frustrated, our friend will help us. in the way want to be treated 1. Friend is very important in your lift. 2. When we feel sad or have some differences,.... 3. Don’t belive in people who leave you easily,... 4. Than you should treat friends the way you want to be treated. 5. The ture friend is… life difficulties 二、 单词拼写错误。 believe Then true 1. We like share happiness with our friends. 2. I am disagree with you. 3. Friends are always help us. 4. Although make friends is very difficult, ... 5. When we upset or be in trouble,… making 三、动词形式错误 helping are to share 1. We are willing to share happy or sad with our friends. 2. When we meet difficult ,… 3. Don’t believe in those who leave you eas