广州一模任务写作.pptVIP

广州一模任务写作 1、审题： 所给的文段解读与分析 Para1. past: today: overparenting / Parent take charge of everything. Para2: two reasons for overparenting: first: fewer children/ secondly: future depends on one child Para3: negative consequences: less independent/ less determined/ pressure 2.写作要点： 1） Summary 2)以自己或他人成长的某次经历，说明... 3) 表达你在此方面对父母的希望或是建议。 注意以下两点： 1）概括一般单独一个自然段。 2）发表议论或是看法时，依照试题所给的内容本身的顺序，每个要点单独写一个自然段。 优点：保证写作内容覆盖所有的写作点，层次清晰，让阅卷老师一目了然。 Part 1: 摘要的开头语： 1）The story/passage mainly tells us that... 2) The writer/ author tells us that ... 3) The writer states that... 4) According to the passage , we know that ... The passage mainly tells us that nowadays parents like to overparent their children because they are having fewer children. However, this leads to some bad consequences, such as children’s less independence and less determination. According to the passage, we know that because of having fewer children and their future depending on one child, parents like to control everything. This results in children’s less independence and determination. In this passage , the author states that because parents are having fewer children, they increasingly feel the need to control the lives of their children. As a result, many children are becoming less independent, determined and ambitious that in the past. Part2: 以经历→说明影响 记叙文的过渡语： 1) This story (passage) reminds me of a similar experience of ... 2)This story reminds me of another story that happened to ... 3) I also went through such an experience. 4) I have a similar experience. Part2: This passage reminds me of a similar experience of myself. My parents also like to overparent me . They don’t let me do housework or watch TV, and sometimes help me wash my clothes. For example, when I was younger I had an in