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Exercise Write an essay according to the content given below, making sure of the structure of every sentence used. Material: 周恩来的早期经历展现了一位革命领导人(revolutionary leader)的政治进程（political evolution）。 他生在距离上海西北方向二百英里的江苏省淮安镇。 母亲去世了，爸爸又无能供养他，于是周性家族（the Zhou clan）收养了他，由一大群叔叔轮番照顾。 周家是传统的中国家庭（traditional Mandarin family），周恩来从小就在这个家庭受到了中国传统（Chinese classics）的训练。 在满洲沈阳（the Manchurian city of Shenyang），和姑父姑妈一起时，上了几年基督教士办的小学（elementary school），直到十五岁。在这期间，他学到了从西方传来的新知识。（“the new knowledge”。） Instructions Revise your sentence after you read the sentences on the next slide. Pay attention to the original sentences and its clarity. Sentence structure. Suggested expressions Zhou’s early life is a textbook of the political evolution of a revolutionary leader. He was born in the town of Huai’an, about two hundred miles northwest of Shanghai, in the province of Jiangsu. His mother died. His father proved unable to provide for him. The Zhou clan took over his upbringing. The family shuttled him among a host of uncles. His traditional Mandarin family trained Zhou in the Chinese classics from his infancy. He stayed with an aunt and uncle in the Manchurian city of Shengyang. He attended an elementary school for several years until he was fifteen years old. Christian missionaries sponsored the school. In this period he learned “the new knowledge” brought from the West. Full text (part of Zhou Enlai by Richard Nixon) Zhou’s early life is a textbook of the political evolution of a revolutionary leader. He was born in the town of Huai’an, about two hundred miles northwest of Shanghai, in the province of Jiangsu. When his mother died and his father proved unable to provide for him, the Zhou clan took over his upbringing, shuttling him among a host of uncles. His traditional Mandarin family trained Zhou in the Chinese classics from his infancy. But when he stayed with an aunt and uncle in the Manchurian city of Shengyang, he attended an elementary school sponsored by Christian missionaries for seve