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写作评分参照卷分析 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Reading Selectively Or Extensively? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 有人认为读书要有选择 有人认为应当博览群书 我的看法 14 points How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view. Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published every day. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books, and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively. But others may not agree. They emphasize that today’s society is not what it used to be. If you want to be successful, you must read widely and acquire knowledge in both natural sciences and humanities. Is a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in others, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively. Who’s right? There is a lot to be said for both sides of the argument. However, I think we should read extensively first and then learn deeply about the subject we are interested in. 本文第一段引出话题，说在读书问题上各人有各人的观点。第二段和第三段分别说明两种观点。一些人认为读书要有选择，另一些人则认为要博览群书，各自都有各自的理由。最后一段阐明自己的看法。紧紧围绕题目的要求，段落分明，表达思想清楚，行文相当流畅。除个别地方外，用词也都符合英语的习惯，基本上无语言错误。文章上下文衔接紧凑，连贯性较好。例如，第二段开头用Some people think …，第三段开头用Others may not agree …，而最后一段用一个问句Who’s right?作为连接，都显得相当自然。另外，英语中常用的一些连接手段， 如what’s more, and, since, but, one (field) … others, However, first, then等，也都用得很恰当。再看考生的谴词造句，无论是在用次上还是在语法上，都表现出良好的基本功。 例如：with the development of modern science and technology …, today’s society is not what it used to be …, There is a lot to be said for …等。如果仔细阅读，你还会发现考生用词上的变化。例如，表达观点看法，不只是用think，还用了argue, agree, emphasize等。 当然文章中也有一些美中不足的地方。例如，在If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in others, he may be