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模拟3： Dear friends， As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some like to have snacks; some others are particular about food; and still some eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health. To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally included proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, we’d better have meals regularly. In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better. That’s all. Thank you! 模拟4: Dear Tom, The Palace Museum is also called the Forbidden City. It was first constructed in 1407 and completed in 1420. It has 9999 rooms in all. In China, the number “9” is traditionally regarded as a lucky one. The Palace Museum attracts many visitors from all over the world every year. Now it is open to Chinese students free every Tuesday. The Palace Museum has a lot of precious treasure in the history of China. Welcome to China. I am looking forward to your arrival. Best wishes! Yours, Li Ming 2010 年会考书面表达： 某英文报纸正举行“我难忘的一次经历”主题征文比赛。 假设你曾参加过全校大合唱比赛。请你以“An unforgettable experience”为题，根据下表提示， 用英语写一篇短文，准备投稿。 Activity A group singing competition Preparation … Result Win the first prize Your feelings e.g. No pains, no gains 注意：（1） 短文徐包括上述要点， 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯 （2） 文中不饿出现真实的人名、校名等个人信息 （3）词数： 100左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数 An unforgettable experience During the past year at high school, I have had many unforgettable experience. One of them was….. 常见失误分析 从评卷老师反馈的情况来看，学生在书面表达中暴露了英语学习中的诸多问题，特别明显的有： 1、篇章方面 （1）审题不仔细。 此次写作要求考生描写“大合唱比赛”，根据题目要求，考生需要发挥想象力，进一步描写赛前准备