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* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * 避免过多适用in order to ... Plain: In order to advance his or her career, a genius needs strong financial support. Interesting: All geniuses need a millionaire to further their careers. Plain: During rush hours in Hanoi, cars often scoot into bike lanes in order to get ahead of the traffic jams. This forces bikers to hug the curbs*. Interesting: During rush hours in Hanoi, cars often scoot into bike lanes to cut through traffic jams, forcing bikers to hug the curbs. * 避免过多适用in order to ... Plain: In order to prepare for millions of visitors for millennium celebrations, the city has launched many projects, some ambitious, some modest, to beautify and modernize itself. Better: Some projects are ambitious, others modest, and all will beautify and modernize a city expecting millions of visitors for millennium celebrations. * 不要过于依赖because ...从句 Plain: We decided to take a taxi because we missed the bus by a second. Interesting: Missing the bus by a second, we decided to take a taxi. Plain: Because my schedule was so busy, I was not able to attend Susans birthday party. Better: My schedule did not allow me to attend Susans birthday party. * 不要过于依赖because ...从句 Plain: Because I am dealing with the subject at the moment, let me give you a few statistics. Better: While I am on the subject, let me give you a few statistics. Plain: Deng Xiaoping initiated the responsibility system in the countryside and because of that he took the rural reform program to the next step. Better: Deng Xiaoping initiated the responsibility system in the countryside and furthered the cause of rural reform. * Voice语态的隐含意义 Weak Passive: Hell need to be looked after. Strong Active: Hell need looking after. Weak Passive: Youre going to be covered favorably by the press. Strong Active: Youre going to get fabulous press. * Weak Passive: Do you remember when Nelson Mandela of South Africa was