2013-作文英语.pptVIP

An unforgettable camping One Saturday Jason and Neil decided to go camping. On the way, they talked about lots of interesting things. Then, when they arrived at a beautiful river, they decided to camp there. While Jason was putting up the tent, Neil made a fire to cook food. After a while, everything was ready. They were eating happily when it suddenly began to rain. As they were getting into the tent, they heard someone shouting for help. They rushed to the river as soon as possible and found a little boy struggling in the river. They tried their best to pull the boy out of the water. Luckily, the boy was still alive. Jason and Neil felt very proud though their clothes were all wet. In my opinion, we should learn from them to help people in need. A report from people’s Daily “Chinese style of crossing the road” is a ridicule(调侃)used by the net friend. It describes a way of some Chinese walking across the road without looking at the lights. It is generally believed that as long as we cross the road together, no car dares to hit us. It is wrong of us not to obey（遵守） the rules. It should be punished. Rules are made for people to follow, not to break. When people cross roads, they might be in a rush for doing something, so they don’t care about the traffic rules. In this picture, groups of people are running a red light. As a result , it may cause accidents. There may be different reasons in different people. Probably you would be late. So next time, you’d better go out earlier. Someone may say since there is no car, he can cross the road. But for your safety, please wait a minute. Do not follow the ones who lead themselves to danger! In my opinion, everyone should obey the traffic rules. At the same time the government had better build more footbridges or underpasses. 评分标准： 1. 评分原则： （1）本题总分15分，按5个档次给分。 （2）评分要求：先读文章，再定档次，最后评分。 （3）短文内容：描述图片5分；感受或看法5分；愿望或建议5分 （4）书写：如书写较差，影响信息传递，将分数降低一个档次。 （5）评分时应注意内容表达、词汇和语法结构的使用是否准确、上下文是否连贯及语言表述是否得体。 第五档（13～15分）：能写明全部要点，语言基本无误