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练习（DRILL TIME） 2009-06: 越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么？ On weekends, it can be noticed that hundreds of people—men and women, the old and the young–visit museums to see the exhibits.  2011-06: 现在网上购物已经成为一种时尚 Every day, it can be seen that thousands of people—men and women, the old and the young—shop online to buy various goods. 段首：现象描述（正面） In China, bicycles have gained great/wide popularity among the Chinese people. Based on a recent report， a majority of residents in the cities acknowledged that they have two or three bicycles. During rush hour, it can be noticed that thousands of people—men and women, the old and the young– ride their bicycles to work or study. Compared with cars, bicycles have many advantages/are superior in many ways. First, they are much cheaper than cars and easy to ride. Second, bicycles are small enough to park anywhere, while cars need a larger piece of land to park. Third, riding bicycle is good for health. Last but not least, they bring no noise nor air pollution. What’s more, with lower speed, bicycles are safer than cars. Though(转意) cars are much faster and comfortable, they are too expensive. They consume plenty of oil and pollute the air. Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car. Moreover, they often cause traffic jam and accidents. 我的看法 In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising. Since China is a developing country with a large population. I think riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions. It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time. 三段式作文的结构安排 现象解释型模板一 现象解释型作文模板二 ① Recently, . ①描述现象，引起话题② What amazes us most is ②表现较为典型的一个方面③ It is true that . ③对于现象做出的评论④There are many reasons explaining ④承上启下,解释这一现象的原因⑤The main reason is ⑤说明原因一⑥What is more, ⑥原因二⑦Thirdly, ⑦原因三　⑧As a result, . ⑧讲述导致的结果⑨Considering all these, . ⑨作者的态度⑩For one thing, . ⑩观点一11.For another, . 11.观点二12.In conclusion, . 12.总结全文 高分特征 1. 内容相关 （切题即可） 2. 结构清晰 （新闻联播三段论） 3. 语言精彩 （句子结构变化多） Writing t