高三英语写作指导.pptVIP

各个档次的给分范围及标准(满分25分) A.第五档(很好)：(21-25分) 1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2.覆盖所有内容要点。 3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。 5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。 B.第四档(好)：(16-20分) 1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2.虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。 3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 4.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 6.达到了预期的写作目的。 专家解读 三点关键定档因素(不跑题是前提) 内容丰富精炼　　 词汇多样性 语法复杂性 文章连贯性（条理清楚合逻辑） 书面表达的五项秘诀： 审题，遣词，造句，润色，谋篇 Ⅴ. Improve bad organization I’m expecting you to come to China. There is no doubt that traveling by the CRH is the best choice if you want to save money. With the development of technology, the CRH has been well developed . It’s so convenient because the train will arrive at the station on time. Ⅴ. Improve bad organization I’m expecting you to come to China. There is no doubt that traveling by the CRH, which has been well developed with the development of technology , is the best choice when you arrive in Beijing . It’s so convenient because the train will arrive at the station on time. * * * * 高三英语写作指导课 书写对比鲜明 poor good Content / organization/ vocabulary/ language (varieties of sentences and few errors ) In pair/group Example Dear Peter, I’m expecting you to come to China. When you arrive in Beijing, you’d better take the CRH train, which has been well developed and become popular in China nowadays. It has lots of different lines, so it is convenient for you to travel wherever you want to. The CRH trains are spacious, comfortable and run at the top speed of 350 km per hour. They are seldom delayed and guarantee the safety of travelers. It’s easy to get tickets through many channels, such as by telephone, through the Internet, or on the?self-service ticket machine. Besides, prices of tickets are reasonable. It offers first-class services to passengers and I am sure you will enjoy a good journey. Yours sincerely, Wang Qiang The main advantages (the body) The vehicl