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phoenix symbolism On the way—漫长、辛苦、劳累 漫漫人生路的缩影 Possible ﹠Impossible—山林、稻草人、大黑狗 神秘、意料之外的事 Help—猎人、好心女士 个体之间的联系、来匆匆去匆匆，自己的路自己走 Forget—抓药、为什么 活着的理由 Phoenix—浴火重生、生命轮回的生生不息 Christmas Writing style 情节简单，寓意深刻—出发，路上，到达。圣诞节气氛与主人公名字“凤凰”呼应，通过主人公从日出走到正午，再走到日落，作者通过生命轮回和人生之路的象征，在普通的故事中蕴含了深刻的哲理。 捕捉细节，深化主题 捕捉细节，深化主题 外貌：She wore a dark striped dress reaching down to her shoe tops, and an equally long apron of bleached sugar sacks, with a full pocket.—交代家庭背景 动作:Her fingers slid down and along the ground under the piece of money with the grace and care they would have in lifting an egg from under a setting hen.—使小说的象征意义具有普遍性和代表性，也使平凡的故事蕴含了深刻的主题。 独白话语 陈述性自语 倾诉性独语 异性化对白 交际性对话 陈述性自语 “Up through pines”, she said at length. “Now down through oaks.” “Through the maze now”, she said, “for there was no path.” “Now comes the trial,” said phoenix. 推进叙事，读者参与 倾诉性独语 “I wasn’t as old as I thought,” she said. “Sun so high! ”she cried, leaning back and looking, while the thick tears went over her eyes. “The time getting all gone here. ” 凸显主观评价 异性化对白 “Old woman,” she said to herself, “that black dog come up out of the weeds to stall you off, and now there he sitting on his fine tail, smiling at you.” 张三呀张三，你怎么这么糊涂呢？ 我怎么这么糊涂呢？ 立体刻画人物，用逆向支撑方式，增加感染力，使表述的信息更加突出。 交际性对话 Old Phoenix said, “Out of my way, all you foxes, owls, beetles, jack rabbits, coons and wild animals, …” “Ghost,” she said sharply, “who be you the ghost of? For I have heard of nary death close by.” 寻求沟通的欲望，前进的勇气和决心，深化主题 * *