英语写作讲解(精).ppt

学生作文展示 25班 刘茂强 There is an arguement on whether Senior 3 students should go spring outing or not.Finally,we get the following results. About 65% of the students think we should go spring outing.Because it may let us touch nature,and we can get fresh air.As we know, it is good for our health.What’s more,going spring outing makes our brains relaxed,which helps us study well . However,about 35%of students are against it. Because college entrance examination is coming, we might not have a good time. And it has a bad effect on our schoolwork. Therefore, they think they shouldn’t go spring outing. 评语：文章信息完整，结构好，连贯流畅 卷面整洁,书写工整。 分四段写： 　Para.1. Introduction: 引入主题句 Para. 2. Point1 有一些人认为…… 　Para. 3. Point2 另一些人认为…… 　Para .4. Conclusion 我的看法…… 1.grade three students of a high/middle school 2.There are 65%students agree it. 3.Have 65%students agree it. ---- 65% of the students agree with it be in favor of the idea be for the idea 4.They thought go spring outing can touch the nature. ---- They think we can get close to nature by going spring outing 5.They think going spring outing can make them breath the fresh/ flesh air. 呼吸新鲜空气（ breathe some fresh air ) 6.It is benefit to their healthy. It is beneficial to their health. 7. make spirit loose. 精神放松（relax oneself refresh oneself / make sb relaxed 8.let our brain have a good rest 大脑休息（rest their brains ） 9. be good for studying be good for study 10. (1) High exam will come. (2)Because of college entrance examination is coming. (3)With college entrance examination is coming. ------ With the college entrance examination coming. Key words: 高三学生（senior 3 students） 春游(go spring outing） 讨论（discussion） 接触自然（be close to nature） 呼吸新鲜空气（ breathe some fresh air ） 精神放松（relax themselves ） 大脑休息（rest their brains ） 高考临近（ with college entrance examination drawing near ） 没心情玩（don’