上海高考英语作文命题特点概要1.pptVIP

Riding bicycle is very common in China. Just as the saying goes, “Each coin has two sides”, riding a bicycle is not only convenient but also dangerous. （not only…but also 的并列 结构用错）In my opinion, I think we should encourage riding bicycles for the following reasons: （In my opinion 和 I think 语意重复） has both advantages and disadvantages First, comparing with cars, bicycles are handy and convenient. （“与…相比较”的非谓语结构用错) They allow us to go anywhere nearby easily. It’s more convenient for us to ride a bicycle than to take a bus, especially in the rush hour. Second, riding bicycles do no harm for the environment. （主谓不一致，介词用错） Unlike cars,. bicycles do not cause sound pollution，they don’t release harmful gases to the air. （逗号连接两句话） compared with does no harm to or Now you see the great advantages of riding a bicycle. To enjoy a convenient and environment-friendly life, bicycle is your first choice. （遗漏冠词） a bicycle 2）句式多样性 （variation） 例 你如何理解 “Hope for the best and prepare for the worst” 这种生活态度 ，谈谈你的感想 （字数120-150） The modern society is full of competition and pressure. In it, a man’s success relates to hard work. It also relates to his attitude. “Hope for the best and prepare for the worst” thus has become the philosophy of life for many people In the modern society full of competition and pressure, not only relates to hard work but also to his attitude. On the one hand, “hope for the best” means a healthy and positive spirit. People are always hoping for the best. They will make the best use of every minute to struggle for their goals. On the other hand, “prepare for the worst” can make a person feel at ease. He need not worry about the possible bad results. He can put all his mind into his work or study. As to me, I always follow this rule. The College Entrance Examination is coming. I am trying my best to improve my abilities. I’m making full use of all the time to absorb more knowledge.