四级作文的注意事项整理.pptVIP

四级作文句型 作文不理想的几个原因 英语底子薄弱 词汇量限制 缺乏思想，深度不够 缺乏应试技巧 作文评分标准 阅卷标准分为五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分，每一等都可上下浮动一分，各等的具体标准如下： 2分--条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重 错误。　　5分--基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。　　8分--基本切题。表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯；但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。　　11分--切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。　　14分--切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本无语言错误。 除了以上五个主要标准之外，评分时还考虑以下三个因素：　　l．白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给零分。　　2. 字数不足者酌情扣分(81-89个词扣1分，7l-80个词扣2分，61-70个词扣3分，51一60个词扣4分，不足50个词最多只给5分)。所计字数不包括卷面上已给主题句。　　3．只写一段者0-4分，只写两段者0-9分。 句子的写作 词汇问题：尽量规避拿不准拼写容易出错词汇 表达严重汉化 1） Some one consider that fresh water will not touch its end.(96年1月，2分) 2） One man‘s life lack of money, he will impossible to live on. （95年1月，5分） 3） As is know, that there are much fake commodities in todays society.(97年12月，6分) man can live happiness， Man is iron, and food is steel., ＂Women are half side sky.＂  几种常见的句子结构 一、there be 结构 二、比较结构 三、表达原因的结构 四、否定结构 五、含有it 的结构 一、There be结构 考生病句：　　1. There are many people like to go to the movies.　　2. There are different kinds of vegetables can be bought on the market by people. 正确表达：　　1. There are many people who like to go to the movies.　　2. There are different kinds of vegetables that people can buy on the market. There be 结构 There is not a moment to be lost.刻不容缓，时不我待 There are many people rushing into the cities every year. There are many things we can do to prevent traffic accidents. There is no use holding back the wheel of history. 二、 比较结构 考生病句：　　1. Comparing with the bike, the car runs much faster.　　2. The climate in Walton is colder than other cities. 正确表达：　　1. Compared with the bike, the car runs much faster.　　2. The climate in Walton is colder than that of other cities. 1． 同级比较 　　1） In 1998 we produced as many cars as we did in the previous five years.　　2） We have accomplished as much in the past three years as would have taken ten yearsin the past. 2． 比较级 　　1） Children now enjoy better medical treatment than before.　　2） We can live longer without food than we can (li