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Lecture 7 Translation method II;Lecture 7 Translation method II;Stylistic analysis: colloquial;In the fall of 1964：1964年秋天， 如果翻译成“在1964年的秋天”，加了两个字就显得比较正式，与原文的fall有所不符。 ;;Broaden his horizons可以翻译成“拓宽视野”，但考虑到其非正式文体，最好使用汉语中通俗的说法“见见世面”、“开开眼界”等说法。booking all the first-class hotels at cut rates since it was off-season, “此时既为旅游淡季，他就能以折扣价为丹尼的整个行程预定最高级的旅店客房”。; all the first-class hotels不能严格直译，否则逻辑有问题。他不可能将欧洲所有旅店都住一遍，因此加上“整个行程”或“这趟旅行”等说法，使汉语的逻辑通畅。同样，由于他只是一个人，因此first-class hotels这个复数形式应该译成“一流的旅店客房”，如果按照原文直译，汉语读者便有可能误认为将整个旅店都定了下来。 ; and would not even charge any of the usual commissions. 而且居然破例不收佣金。 评论：体会一下，参考译文中这个字眼是否比较简洁而达意？ 而找到这个字眼又并非易事，需要从阅历的积累中萃取。;After all, they were neighbors.他们毕竟是隔壁邻居嘛。 注意最后一个语气词的用法。显然要表现出After all的文体风格，需要使用一个语气词，许多同学这一点做得很好。 ; 1964年秋天，隔壁一间旅行社的老板建议丹尼去外面开开眼界。他愿意为丹尼安排一次欧洲旅行。此时既为旅游淡季，他就能以折扣价为丹尼的整个行程预定最高级的旅店客房，而且居然破例不收佣金。他们毕竟是隔壁邻居嘛。 ; It was not much that Ruth wanted to say -- merely that Norman had been going to take her to a lecture that night, but that he had a headache, and she was so disappointed, and she had the tickets, and that if he had no other engagement, would he be good enough to take her? Jack London Martin Eden ; 这一段主要应体会到说的是Ruth 和两个人的一件事。如果理解有困难，可将原文改写成直接引语，帮助理解： Ruth said: “Norman was to take me to a lecture tonight, but he has a headache. I am disappointed and I have the tickets. If you have nothing to do, would you please take me there?” ; 罗丝并没有多少话要说——不过是说那天晚上诺曼本来要带她去听一个讲演，可他忽然头疼起来，去不成了，她很失望。她手里还拿着门票，要是他没有别的约会，肯不肯陪她去？ ;Lecture 7 Translation method II;Domestication;Part two: The significance of domestication; I never met a more interesting man than Mayhew. He was a lawyer in Detroit. He was an able and a successful one. By the time he was thirty-five he had a large and a lucrative practice, he had amassed a competence, and he stood on the threshold of a distinguished career. (William S. Maugham: Mayhew) 我从未见到过比美赫尤更有意思的人了。他是底特律的一名律师，为人能干，事业