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第一讲 Myself 写作要点： 一般可从三个层次入手。 第一层指出人物的自然情况。如果是书信的应用文就说明写信的原因，表达收到信时的心情。 第二层具体写出自己的各方面的喜好和厌恶，并阐述原因。 第三层扣题，再次提出人物的特点。(书信式，要在回信的最后表达某种祝愿：希望尽快见到对方或给对方送去祝福。) 技巧点拨： 学生对有关写人的话题的写作并不陌生，而且有很多素材可写。从题材看有介绍人物类，要说明人物的年龄、爱好、外貌、性格特征等（外国朋友要介绍国籍），此类可用说明性语言。有应用文体的书信类，书信类书面表达通常有明确的目的性，写作应就涉及的话题进行写信或回信。有与他人探讨某一热门话题、交流彼此观点和想法的类型，通常以议论文体话题就某话题讨论各自的见解或看法。 写作练习 1 ： 同学们，你能回答下面的问题吗？试试看，再把它连成一篇小文章。 1 What’s your name? 2 How old are you? What are you like?3 Where do you study? What class are you in? 4 What’s your favorite color, food, teacher, book.......? Why do you like them ? 5 What’s your hobby ? 6 What kind of child are you ? Myself _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ Sample Myself 　　Hello! I am Zhou Xiaolin. I’m 11 years old. I study in the No.1 Primary School. I am quiet, kind and smart. I don’t like sports, but I like reading books very much. My favorite food is fish because it’s tasty . My favorite fruits are apples and bananas because they are sweet. In a week, I like Friday most. As you know, the weekend is coming. My favourite teacher’s Miss Zhu. Her class is so much fun. On Saturday, I often do homework and play computer games. Saturday is fun for me! How about Sunday? I often read books and watch TV. It’s sweet for me! Sometimes I do housework on weekends, such as clean my bedroom, set the table and do the dishes. But I can’t cook the meals. This is m