中考英语写作复习研讨课.pptVIP

三、时态和语态问题 四、Chinglish 现象 四、Chinglish 之缺少动词现象 在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：Im tired. I happy I can come to Beijing Zoo. I am happy I can come to Beijing Zoo. The apples cheap. Ill take some. The apples are cheap. Ill take some. 四、Chinglish 之缺少介词、冠词等现象 还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。 Because heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting. Because of the heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting. 四、Chinglish 之代词的误用 英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。 I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father. My mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for my father. 五、行文的逻辑性问题 典型病例 名词的单复数问题 主谓一致问题 时态和语态问题 Chinglish 现象 行文的逻辑性问题 词类错用 训练学生记住批改符号 统一批改符号，例如： 删除 插入 替代 佳句 句子不通畅 My favorite player is Yao Ming.He was born on September 12th,1980, in Shanghai. He is 2.26 metres tall and weight 134 kilograms. He is son of two great basketball players and learned how to play basketball when he was very young. At the age of 18, he joined China Men’s Basketball Team. In 2002, he joined the NBA. From then on he is on Houston Rockets. He works hard and plays very well. He has great skills. Now he is trying to making his dream come true. Yao Ming is also warm-hearted. He is friendly to his fans and his teammates. And he tries to help the AIDS patients. Now he is a superstar. We all like him, and we all proud of him. 描写人物的经典词汇： 1）表示发型：short, long, curly, straight, brown, red…hair 2）表示身材体态：short, medium height/build, thin, fat, tall, heavy, strong, athletic… 3）表示爱好：playing basketball/the piano… fishing, hiking, reading, singing… 4）表示性