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怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，而在中考中获取高分呢？ 一、写作决窍 　　总体把握，要点齐全；人称时态，逻辑清楚； 　　关键词汇，动词第一；组词成句，结构完整； 　　组句成文，连词增色；此路不通，绕道迂回； 　　字迹工整，留好印象；从句适量，高分有望。 ??二、写作步骤 　　1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。 　　2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料；同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。 　　3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。 　　4.先草稿，后抄写。 三、习作点评 　　[2004年全国中学生英语magazine?about it. Tell the magazine readers. 　　·What?exactly?your hobby is; 　　·When and how you?became interested in this hobby; 　　·Why you enjoy your hobby; 　　·About your hopes and plans for the future. 　　写作书became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful?sentences.At the same time I canimprove爉y writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true. c①开门见山、点题。②真情流露，理由充分。 ③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、 ④巧妙使用句型以表决心。 　　[点评]：档次13-14分。 　　①清楚表达写作作文英语became interested in,come true……等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。 四、培养途径 　　1.根据老师布置的写作作文写作tourists?come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment.They threw their?rubbish,such as?plastic燽ags,fruit? skins and?waste爌aper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How?hdangerous爄t was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into?sdustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking toprevent?starting a?forest?fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy. 　　B. [思路点拨]： 　　①夹叙夹议(说明现状，谈谈感想)。 　　②时态：一般现在时态。 　　③广告词的含义——水很重要，应保护和再利用(写作dirty?water into rivers and lakes.Water?pollution?is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.