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福建高考英语试卷分析 写作篇2014第二节 书面表达（满分25分）如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语( quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。 ?“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm. ?- Sir Winston, Churchill 内容要求： 1．你对该引语的理解： 2．你的相关经历： 3．恰当的结尾。 注意： 1．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数： 2．文中不能出现考生的具体信息： 3．词数：120左右。 This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that _____________.【考点】考察开放性作文【写作指导】本文属于开放性作文，要求考生根据丘吉尔的名言“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.发表自己的理解，并举例说明。属于议论文的一种，主要使用第三人称和一般现在时。在讲述各人经历时可以使用过去时。要点：1.该名言告诉我们：面对失败，我们不应该泄气，相反我们应该鼓足勇气充满热情继续努力。2.各人经历：学习骑自行车的例子。3.如果我们不尝试，我们就不可能成功，最重要的是我们要坚持下去。本文对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。【一句多译】回顾这一切，我感觉如果我失去信心，我就不能学会骑自行车了。（1）Looking back, I feel I wouldnt be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.（2）When I looked back, I feel I wouldnt be able to ride a bike If I had lost heart.【参考范文】 This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldnt get discouraged right after failures. Rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures. At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better.? Looking back, I feel I wouldnt be able to ride a bike had I lost heart. Actually, we cant succeed in everything we try. Whats important is that we should stick at it.2013第二节 书面表达(满分25分）孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。 内容要求： 1.描述漫画内容；2. 分析漫画所揭示的问题； 3. 提出你的看法。注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯； 3.词数120左右;4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。ks5u参考词汇:pave the wayFrom the picture, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. 【写作指导】2013年