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Introduction 引用原文结论: In the argument/editorial/letter/memo above, the author/arguer/director/… concludes/recommends/claims/presents/asserts/ that… 指出原文引用的论据: To support/substantiate/justify/… this conclusion/recommendation/claim/argument, the arguer cites/quotes/provides/points out the evidence that… In addition/Also /additionally/moreover/meanwhile, the author reasons that… 指出原文有缺陷，表明自己立场: The argument seems logically sound at first glance; close scrutiny reveals, however, that the evidences given above provide little credible support/credibility for the speaker’s assertion. However, the argument relies on/is based on a series of unsubstantiated/problematic/faulty/dubious assumptions/reasoning which render it unconvincing as it stands. Conclusion Paragraph 先概括性说原论证是错的： In summary, /In conclude, /To sum up, /To summarize/To put it in a nutshell In short, the argument is seriously flawed in several critical respects. In sum, the speaker’s advice/recommendation/argument/conclusion is ill conceived and poorly supported. The conclusion lacks credibility. /the conclusion reached in this argument is invalid and misleading. 提出建设性意见： I would suspend my judgment about the credibility of the recommendation until the arguer can provide evidence that… To bolster/solidify/strengthen the argument, the arguer must provide/supply/give detailed/clearer information/evidence/statistics that… To make it logically more reliable/acceptable, the arguer would have to demonstrate that… To better evaluate/assess the argument, the arguer is expected to give more accurate information concerning… Body Paragraph 先指出逻辑缺陷所在之处: To begin with, the arguer unfairly assumes that…/the argument is based on a false assumption that… First, a threshold problem with the argument involves the survey itself/the definition of the term “”… The arguer fails to take into consideration/account (other factors) in the analysis. 还可以在其后紧接着来一句however/yet: First of all, the editor’s recommendation relies on/