书面表达训练之求助信写作.ppt

求助信基本结构 1.自我介绍， 2.点明目的； 3.叙述现状，告知问题 4.寻求帮助, 5.期盼回复。 注意事项： 1.通常情况下，使用一般现在时 2.阐述要清晰，用词要恰当，言语要礼貌。 可适当使用过渡词：first / to begin with; oreover / besides/what’s more / in addition ; inthe meanwhile; also使文章脉络清晰，条理清楚，有较强的层次感。 可适当使用委婉句型：would you like to, beg sb. to do sth., would like sb. to do sth., I’m sure来体现出作者的谦虚客气，诚恳朴实 表达方式运用多样化：如 定语从句、目的状语从句、宾语从句的运用可增强文章的表达效果，提高了文章的表达档次 自我介绍 I’m …/ my name is … 点明目的 I’m writing to you for some help . I’m writing a letter to you to get some help. I am sorry to bother you, but i really need your help with … 叙述现状 I often feel blue and depressed. 告知问题 I have some difficulty / trouble in doing something because of my poor … I find it difficult for me to do sth. I am now confronted with the following difficulties. The reason why I write this letter is that I have trouble when I .... 寻求帮助 Could you please give us some advice ? I really don’t know what to do and expect you to give me your advice / suggestions. I have no idea what i should do and long for your advice. I would like to turn to you for help. Faced with so much difficulty, i have to ask you for some help. Facing so much difficulty, i have to ask you for some help. I’m in desperate need of your help your help is urgently needed. I would appreciate anything you can do to help me with this matter. I would be grateful if you can give me some suggestions on how to do sth. 期盼回复 Looking forward to your reply and I’ll be grateful for your help. I’m sure I can make great progress with your help I’m waiting for your early reply. 黄金模板 Dear ______, my name is __________. I’m writing to you to ___________________. I_______________(your current situation). (give information to show the adviser why you need help) first,________________ besides,____________. what’s more___________________. Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to introduce to us some good ways to _________________________.Looking forward to your reply