语文中考作文指导课件.pptVIP

* How can we write a good composition(作文)? 第一步：都要认真审题，明确写作体裁、要求和提示要点 具体做法：用笔勾画 2008春节前，在我国的部分地区出现了百年罕见的特大暴风雪，给人民带来了重大损失，造成若干人伤亡，很多人深受失去家园之苦。获悉这一消息后，人们纷纷伸出了援助之手，你们班级也不甘落后。请以班委会的名义根据提示写一封100词左右的英文倡议书。要求语义连贯，中心突出，详略得当，可适当发挥。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) 提示： 1、暴风雪造成的重大损失； 2、大家纷纷献出爱心； 3、作为学生我们应该做些什么？ 第二步： 列出写作提纲（Outline）。 具体做法： 根据段落整理写作要点 不要遗漏要点！ Write an Outline 可以用英文或中文 Introduction Main body Conclusion Great trouble Show love all over the country What should we students do? (看写作要求） (自拟） (自拟） （已给出） 写作前： 确定人称、时态 写作后： 检查 词数足够、要点完整，没有语法错误 Dear classmates, A sudden snowstorm attacked some parts of our country before the 2008 Spring Festival. It brought us lots of trouble. Thousands of people were trapped in the stations, in the airports and on the highways. In such a heavy snowstorm, a lot of people suffered from the loss of their homes. What was worse, many people were hurt , even lost their lives. After the news was reported, people all over the country showed their great love in different ways. Some gave food, clothes, drinking water, medicine and everything necessary, and some even gave money to them. As students, of course we should try our best to help those people in trouble. So offer your only pocket money, let’s help to fill the world with love. class committee Dear classmates, A sudden snowstorm attacked some parts of our country before the 2008 Spring Festival. It brought lots of trouble to the people. Some people lost their lives.People all over the country donated food, drinking water, colthes to them. As we students , what should we do? We should donate our pocket money to them. We can also send them our old books. 扣分原因一 词数不够！每少5词，扣1分，约少40词，只得12分。 Dear classmates, A sudden snowstorm attacked some parts of our country before the 2008 Spring Festival. It was the most serious snowstorm