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范文选篇 Jenny’s advice on writing While many times I’ve been invited to grade the NMET papers, many of the students did very poorly in the writing section. I have some advice that I can share with you based on their writings. The first thing would be to make sure that when you do the writing the sentences are grammatically correct. Jenny’s advice on writing You should also try to use the patterns you’ve learnt. Use real English, not Chinglish. Your sentences should be well connected with conjunctions. Another way to better your writing is to use some advanced words that can make your writing much more beautiful. I really hope everyone would be successful in your up-coming exams. （2） 2001NMET考生答卷范例 减负前后的变化： 周末活动（减负前） 周末活动（减负后） 白天：上课、做作业 白天：参观博物馆、 学习电脑、绘画等 晚上：做作业 晚上：看新闻、读书、 看报 就寝时间：11：30 就寝时间：10：00 Good beginning : Although there is still much debate over whether the plan of reducing students’ learning load should be carried out , it has indeed brought us many pleasant changes. Body: Take the weekend life for example. One month ago, we just attended classes and did our homework from morning till night. That left us very tired, and we had no time at all to do what we wanted. But now , as a result of less burden of studies, we can do whatever we like. Ending: As far as I am concerned, I strongly hold that this plan should be carried out continually not only because it gives us more space to develop our critical thinking and independent ability but also because we really feel much happier than ever before. (8) 高考2003书面表达题 假如你是李华， 你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房的面积为25平方米，月租500元。 （8）2003高考范文 Dear Bob, I’m so glad to learn that you are coming in September. I’ve found a place for you. It’s a small flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen.