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一模开放作文讲评 一模开放作文讲评 三里屯一中高三英语组 开放作文指导 1. “考试说明”：文章扣题，结构完整，内容充实，健康，思想活跃，逻辑清晰，语言准确，交际得体。 2. 2012 年开放作文对文章是否扣题，内容是否充实，逻辑是否清晰三方面尤其关注。 3. 试题鼓励考生通过观察分析，确定立意，并把个人理解与图画内容结合。。。把推理过程叙述清楚，无论哪一种解释都应当建立在一个完整缜密的逻辑框架中。 如何审图？ 图1 图2 突出对比 如何立意？ 批判： 不应该目标过高 We shouldnt aim too high. 2. 不应该选择不适合的方法 We shouldn’t choose a improper way. 3. 不应该盲目做事，不仔细观察 We shouldn’t do things without observing. 赞扬：设立更高的目标，为之坚持不懈 We should a high goal and stick to it. 立意要注意： 审图要突出主要问题，不能漏掉主要元素，也无须过于关注不直观、过于微小的细节。 立意要简洁明了，最好在议论段开头给出，更有利于突出论点。 As you can see in the picture, there is a girl attempting to pick the apple on a tall tree. But besides her is a lower tree with some apples on it as well. Obviously , the apple she want is too high for her to reach it. 立意1. 我们应该设定一个合适的目标 对图的分析（想法）：I feel puzzled why doesnt she pick the apple from the lower tree ? After all it is easier for her to get the apple. 深层议论：Actually, this girl stands for some persons in our life and apples on the trees are the symbol of the goals they set for themselves. 正反论证 立意1. 我们应该设定一个合适的目标 深层议论：Actually, this girl stands for us and apples on the trees are the symbol of the goals we set for ourselves. If we set a target which is beyond our ability, even if we spare no effort to achieve it , we may end up getting some disappointment. On the contrary, setting a proper goal is beneficial for us to harvest what I want at the beginning, and help us gain more confidence and walk further. As you can see in the picture, there is a girl attempting to pick the apple on a tall tree. Even if besides her is a lower tree with some apples on it as well, she is struggling to get the apple she want. 立意2. 设定一个高目标，为之坚持不懈 对图的分析（想法）： Honestly, I admire what she does. 联系实际：in fact, this girl stands for some persons in our life and apples on the trees are the symbol of the goals they set for themselves. 深层议论：In fact, this girl stands for some persons in our life and apples on the trees are the symbol of the goals they set f