2011书面表达三（研究性学习）.pptVIP

书面表达三（限时训练五） 某英语报向中学生征集关于开展研究性学习的文章，请你根据提示，用英语写一篇介绍你校研究性学习活动的短文。 存在问题： 1. 书写较差，卷面不整洁，涂改较多。 2. 部分同学遗漏要点(主要是感想与体 会部分）。 3. 拼写错误严重。 local costome choice the subject 4. 中式英语、牵强拼凑的表达较多，不会套用句型，逐词翻译。 life wasted water waste water from daily life water was pulled into river… water was poured into river water emission water discharged from… Farmer use agricultural chemicals is the 3rd reason caused pollution. The 3rd reason is pollution caused by frequent use of agricultural chemicals Step 1 List the key points 要点1：研究主题丰富多彩，选择性强 various subjects a wide range of subjects a variety of subjects The subjects of the research are colorful for us to choose from. The subjects of the research range from…to… 要点2: 当地风俗习惯、人民生活变化、环境保护 local customs changes of people’s life /changes of people’s living conditions environmental protection /the protection of the environment 要点 3 你家乡的河流的污染问题 the water pollution in our hometown the polluted river in our hometown 要点 4 工厂废水、生活污水、农民使用的农药 waste water from the factories waste water from people’s daily life agricultural chemicals Step2 Make sentences 要点1 我们的研究主题丰富多彩，选择性强，如当地风俗习惯、人民生活变化、环境保护等。 We have a variety of subjects to choose from, such as local customs , changes of people’s life, protection of the environment and so on.(注意from不可被省略；such as 与前半句用逗号隔开,不能用for example ） There are many kinds of research for us to choose from , such as… So colorful are the research subjects that your choice can range from local customs , changes of people’s life to the protection of the environment. 要点 2：我们小组的研究主题是家乡河流的污染问题。 The research of my group was the pollution of the water in our hometown. Our group made a study of the water pollution in our hometown. Our group carried out a research on the water pollution in our hometown. 要点3 三大污染源是河流污染的主要来源。它们是工厂废水、生活污水、农民使用的农药。 Our research shows that the river is mainly polluted by