图表作文讲评.pptVIP

* 近期某网站就校车安全问题进行了一次社会调查，结果见下图。请根据图示用英语写一篇短文，介绍调查结果并谈谈你的看法，供有关部门参考。 注意：1.文章的开头已经给出。 2.词数不少于120。 3.提示词：报废车abandoned vehicles ,安全设备safety equipment，超载be overloaded 作文讲评 一、百分数做主语后面的名词不会表达。 36.13% of interviewee trust school buses. 40.34% of the people doesn’t trust school buses. 23.53% percent the interviewee unsure. The interviewee trust school buses is 36.13%. As can be seen from the chart, only 36.13% of the interviewees trust school buses, while 40.34% of them show their distrust, 23.53% of them don’t show their opinions about it. 发表建议　voice their opinions　　 二、审错数据 Of those who show their disbelief, 35.29% are afraid of abandoned vehicles being used and 24.37% worry that school buses are often overloaded. About 21.35% of them worry that the school buses are not equipped with safety equipment 把第二辐图的数据看成: 35.29%校车是报废车;24.3%的校车超员 35.29% of the school buses are the abandoned vehicles. 24.3% of the school buses are overloaded. Children are the future of our country. We should take measures to stop using the school buses. 三、供有关部门参考的看法写成了感想 I think effective measures should be taken to ensure the safety of students. More money should be used to improve the quality of school buses. All the school buses should be examined regularly. 四、思路不清，拼凑句子，无可读句子 *