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初中学生英语写作能力的培养 施志红 2008. 5 07年写作无现成的范文可套 Things I hate to do Most of the time I do things which I enjoy. However, there are still things that I hate to do. … 三、了解评分标准 07作文分标准 ７＋７＋２ (内容＋语言＋组织结构) 组织结构分 1. 内容充实，不写废话；上下文连贯、用 语规范、表达准确、无或少见语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给2分. 组织结构分 2. 一般情况下，内容和语言在13分以上者(含) ， 方可得到1~2分组织结构分. 组织结构分 3. 内容和语言在12分以下者，如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达，可酌情考虑给1分组织结构分. 组织结构分 4. 通篇句型、句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即 使无语法错误，一般亦不予给组织结构 分。 07作文分析举例 I hate to keep pets and tell lies. The thing that I hate doing most is smoking. As we all know, smoking is not only bad for ourselves but also harmful to others. Whenever my father smokes, I feel rather sick. Besides, it is a waste of money to smoke, I think. What’s more, smoking pollutes the air. So I hate smoking most. （A挡） 07作文分析举例 Such as the housework. Although I sometimes help my mother to do some housework, I really hate it. I don’t like wash dishes. I think it is uncomfortable that you must put your hands into the cold water and then wash the dirty dishes. I don’t like clean my room as well. So my room is always very untidy. My mother told me that I was very lazy. I don’t think so. But I really hate doing housework. （B挡）(5+6+0) 07作文分析举例 Such as doing much homework and watching TV. Everyday, we must do a lot homework and it must spend a long time to finish it. When we finished it. It was already 11 o’clock in the evening. So I hate doing much homework. I loved watching TV when I was a child. I always watching TV for a long time. So it makes my eyes bad. That’s why I hate watching TV now. (C档)　(5+5+0) 四、培养写作能力 1. 指出常见问题 句型单一 东拉西扯 时态错误 用词不当 2.　提醒注意事项 围绕中心 意思连贯