smoke 漫画写作.ppt

In the picture, we can see a young man is smoking in a factory. He sees a sign on the wall which means “No smoking” but he finds that the factory is giving off large quantities of heavy smoke. He is very confused, “Why does the factory forbid people to smoke while the factory itself gives off so much smoke?” Nowadays, many factories know the danger of smoking to themselves and don’t allow people to smoke in the factory. However, they don’t pay any attention to the danger that they cause to the whole society. They give off lots of smoke which does great harm to our environment. In my opinion, we could live without most of the industrial products, but we could not survive without nature! Therefore, something must be done to prevent the pollution caused by all factories. In the picture, we can see a young man is smoking in a factory. He sees a sign on the wall which means “No smoking” but he finds that the factory is giving off large quantities of heavy smoke. He is very confused, “Why does the factory forbid people to smoke while the factory itself gives off so much smoke?” Nowadays, many factories know the danger of smoking to themselves and don’t allow people to smoke in the factory. However, they don’t pay any attention to the danger that they cause to the whole society. They give off lots of smoke which does great harm to our environment. In my opinion, we could live without most of the industrial products, but we could not survive without nature! Therefore, something must be done to prevent the pollution caused by all factories. * Writing based on a cartoon Problems: 1. wrong structures 2. improper description 3.misunderstanding what the picture shows Step I Lead in Step II An example How can we write a composition based on a cartoon? Writing: 根据漫画，请以“烟”为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述下面的内容，并就此发表你的评论。 要求：1. 文章必须包括描述和评论两部分；根据内容适当发挥，注意行文连贯。 2.词数要求: 100-120 A. Make an outline of the writing 1. 漫画内容 Writing: Writi