英语写作幻灯片1.pptVIP

 　　 How to write a past thing? 主要特点 能力要求 主要问题 　　　　 Writing skills 书面表达六步法 书面表达经典示例 请以“A Visit to a Farm”为题，根据提示写一次愉快的参观． 提示：１．今天早上你和你的同学在校门口集合，一起做车去参观了一家农场． 　　　 ２．在农场里你们野炊，唱歌跳舞，下棋，说笑话，讲故事，玩的非常高兴． 　　　 ３．结尾已给出. 要求：１．可围绕主题适当发挥，但应包含所给要点． 　　　 ２．词数60左右，所给结尾不记入总数． …The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say good-bye to the workers. Key points：　 　visited a farm 　 met ···bus 　　　 　　　　　 had a　picnic　 played chess 　　 danced···sang　　told jokes···stories 　　　　　　　　　第五步 查错改错 时态是否正确 主谓是否一致 要点是否全面 人称是否正确 语序问题 是否符合语言习惯　 固定短语 范文　A Visit to a Farm Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. We enjoyed ourselves. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say good-bye to the workers. 第六步 誊写 书写规范 卷面整洁 卷面潦草一定要扣分! 审题，抓点 造句，成文 改错，誉写 Homework * * * * * * * * * * * * visit go welcome show play have/has sing grow meet 记叙文是中考最常见的一种书面表达文体 记叙文的主要描述对象： １．写物 objects ２．写人 persons ３．写事 things 记叙为主 稍加议论 旁带说明 时间顺序 空间顺序 逻辑顺序 原因： 要点不全 线索不清 步骤不对 抄 改 连 扩 抓 审 书面 表达 Time order: Today···early in the morning ···　then··· at noon ··· After a short rest··· 　　　the time passed quickly··· 连词成句　连句成文 Five “w” and one“H”： When: Today Who: We Where: Farm What: Visit a farm Why: Ｐlay How: By bus We visited the farm today. Early in the morning we went there together by buses. The farm workers welcomed us. Then the head of the farm showed we around. We were happy to see the crops and