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二审格式：英文书信由6个部分组成：信头、信内地址、称呼、正文、谦语和署名。而便条写作有别于普通的书信，属于非正式书信。它的格式非常清晰简单。它的篇幅短小，无需写信内地址，有时也无需写祝词和谦语。如此清晰的格式，我们可以将其简单地总结为：称呼顶格、日期在右、首行缩进、署名签在后。三审结构：便条内容和类型不尽相同，可以灵活变通。但各类便条必须包括以下几个基本要素：①Date：便条日期②Salutation：称呼③Body：正文④Signature：署名第二步：提炼要点1．asuburbandistrict2．nowthat3．moreorless4．haveahouse-warmingparty5．foryourself6．aboveall7．innotime8.haveagoodtime第三步：扩点成句1．WehavejustmovedtoasuburbandistrictinsouthwesternShanghai.2．Nowthateverythingismoreorlessorderlyagain.3．Wearegoingtohaveahouse-warmingparty.4．Wewantyoutoseeforyourselfthatlivinginthecountryisnotsoterribleafterall.5．Thesubwaycantakeustothecityproperalmostinnotime.6．WewillhaveagoodtimeonSaturday.【参考范文】6June,2012DearMaryandJohn，WehavejustmovedtoasuburbandistrictinsouthwesternShanghai.Nowthateverythingismoreorlessorderlyagain,wearegoingtohaveahouse-warmingpartythiscomingSaturdayafternoon,11，June.Wewantyoutoseeforyourselfthatlivinginthecountryisnotsoterribleafterall，withthefreshair,clearskyand,aboveall,thesubwaythatcantakeustothecityproperalmostinnotime.WewillhaveagoodtimeonSaturday,wearesure.Manyoldfriendsarecoming,too.Giveusaringtosaythatyouarecoming.Yours，JillandJack【亮点展示】本文语言简洁明了，没有过多的客套话，直截了当地表明了意图，符合便条的特点。同时文中要点全面，说明到位，能够用尽量少的语言表达尽量多的内容。本文还使用了一些高级短语，如nowthat，moreorless，foryourself，aboveall，innotime等，另外长句Wewantyoutoseeforyourselfthat...innotime.和短句WewillhaveagoodtimeonSaturday,wearesure.Manyoldfriendsarecoming,too.的交替使用，使文章读起来富有节奏感。【写作模板】称呼(Salutation)对于不太熟悉的人称：Sir;Gentleman;DearPresident;DearMadame等对于相识的人称：DearMr.Wallash;DearDr.Williams等对于熟悉的亲友称：DearMama;MydearTom等正文(Body)_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________