2024年09月苏州卷应用文、续写学生优作中的好词好句 清单Word版.docx

Group1

1.Carefulandpatient(形容词作伴随状语),wehandedthebagtoPhil,afterwhichweexplainedtohimourrequest(定从，介词提前).Withouthesitation,heuttereda‘yes’asifhehadgreatconfidencetosenditacrossthecountry.

2.Hearingthis(分词作状语),allofusweresothrilledthatwecouldn’thelpappreciatinghimforhisassistance.(so...that句型，can’thelpdoing=can’thelpbutdo情不自禁做……）

3.Consumedwithexcitement(分词作状语),Ashelydashedtothedoor,openeditandpickedupthepackagethatshehadbeenlongwaitingfor.(三连动，定从，过去完成进行时）

4.Afterthepackagewasunwrapped,wefoundthatthelittleteddybearlaytherequietly,safeandsound.AshleyheldCarmeninherarms,nearlyburstingintotears.“Don’tyouknowhowmuchImissedyou!”(否定疑问句加感叹句作宾语）AccompaniedbyCarmenwasthelovelynotebook(倒装句),onwhichtherewerestringsofwordswrittenbydifferenthands(过去分词短语作定语)aswellasphotosofplacesofinterest/scenicspots(名胜）.

Group2

1.Filledwithexcitement(分词作状语),Ashleyblinked(眨眼)herbigeyesandkeptwavinggoodbyetotheleavingteddybear.

2.Afterthatday,whatwedidonadailyroutine(名从)wasimaginehowandwhereCarmenwas(名从).

3.LyinginthemiddleofthebagwasCarmen(倒装),ascleanasitwaswhenitleftusmonthsago,andarounditwerenumerousenvelopesfullofwordsofmotivation.(倒装)

4.Shebitherlipstoholdbacktearsofgratitude.她咬着嘴唇忍住感激的泪水。

5.Itwasnotthepackagebutthechainofhumankindnessthathelpedherpossessthespiritofadventure.(主题升华）

6.Lifeisnotabedofroses(生活不是一帆风顺的),butsomelittleactswithloveweaveabrighterroadforyouandme.(主题升华）

Group3

1.AshleybrieflyexplainedourplanandlookedatPhilwithgreatexpectationsinherglitteringeyes.(闪闪发光的眼睛)

2.Withablend(mix)ofnervousnessandanticipation,wetoldhimeverythingandaskedifhecoulddousafavour.我们既紧张又期待，把一切都告诉了他，并问他是否能帮我们一个忙。

“Noproblem!”herepliedwitharadiantsmile(灿烂的笑容).

3.Ashley’seyesweresparkl