读后续写：成长顿悟类 -- 富有灵性的创作点醒老师的瞬间--高考英语二轮复习写作专项.docx

读后续写：成长顿悟类--富有灵性的创作点醒老师的瞬间

读后续写（2024学年杭州市高三年级一模质量检测卷）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Marywastheartteacherforprimaryschoolstudents.Onthisparticularday,shewasguidingthemthroughtheprocessofdrawingasceniclandscape.Akilayawned(打哈欠),clearlydisinterested—drawingwasn’therthing.AsmallgroupofstudentsgatheredaroundTina,laughingatherunusualdrawing:asunsportingsunglassesandtreestoppedwithicecreamcones.

MaryinstructedTinafirmlybutwithunease,“DrawitthewayIshowedyou.”Asthelessoncontinued,doubtcreptintoMary’smind.Hadthejoyofcreativitybeenovershadowedbythepressuretofitin?Shescannedtheroom,observingherstudents’faces—someconcentrated,othersuncertain.Akila’sdisinterestwasclear,andTina’simaginativedrawinghadbeenmetwithridiculeinsteadofpraise.

Afterclass,MarysatdownwithTina,hertonesoftening.“Whydidyoudrawthesunwithsunglassesandthetreeswithicecreams?”sheaskedgently.

Tina’seyessparkledwithatouchofrebellion(叛逆).“Iloveicecream,andIthoughtthesunwouldlookcoolwithsunglasses.Whydowealwayshavetodrawlikeeveryoneelse?”

Marypaused,herthoughtsracing.Tina’sdrawingsweren’tjustcurious——theywereawindowintoaworldwhereimaginationruled,whererulescouldbebentintodelightfulchaos.Wasshe,byenforcingarigidstyle,killingthatverycreativity?

Thenextmorning,Marywalkedintotheclassroomwitharenewedsenseofpurpose.Sheplacedalargesheetofpaperinfrontoftheclassandannouncedanewproject:theywouldcreateacollective(集体的)artworktitled“OurDreamWorld”withnorules.Theywerefreetousecolors,shapes,andpatternshowevertheywished.

Atfirst,thestudentshesitated,unsureofthisnewfoundfreedom.Akilaleanedback,skepticalofwhatseemedlikeanotherpointlessexercise.ButTina,hercreativitynolongerrestricted,eagerlygrabbedhercrayonsandbegantodrawwith