Diana与流浪狗的故事(绍兴一模2023.11.9)讲义高考英语作文复习专项.pdf

话题:人和动物友好相处，爱，善良

文本分析

Imretiredandnotresponsibleformuchthesedays.Idonthaveschoolage

childrenwhorequirehelpwiththeirhomework.IsleepinwhenIchoose,doalittle

writingandrepairafewthingsaroundthehouse.Mywifeswork,ontheotherhand,

isneverending.（注意妻子工作的特点：永无止境的）Dianatakescareotherparents

intheirmidnineties,tendstohomeandgarden,volunteersforvariousmunity

organizations,andisagoldstargrandmother.Sheisalsoadedicatedcatlover,and

catshavealwaysbeenherpetofchoice.（注意：在下文中妻子的喜欢发生了改变）

Allthatchangedwhentwosmallblackandbrowndogsscamperedintoouryard

andmeltedDianasheart.Ithappenednotlongago.Thedogsappearedunannounced

andhadbeenseenbyhikersonnumerousoccasions,roamingthewoodsliketinylost

souls.Theywerehomelessdogs,aswildasthewind.Noonecouldgetwithin100

yardsofthem.（突出两只狗的也行与不好相处）Intheirstruggleforsurvival,the

twohadfiguredoutawaytoavoidpeople（为下文写Diana女里用爱来感化它们从

而接近它们做铺垫）andfindfoodandshelterinthewilderness.

Theywereundeniablycuteandappealing.Manyofourneighborstriedtolurethemin

withtreats,butthetinydogsremainedunapproachable.（此处写邻居的努力仍然得

不到小狗的亲近，为下文Diana的举动做铺垫）Mywifebeganleavingtastyfood

out,slowlymovingthefoodbowlcloserwitheachfeeding.Asdayspassed,they

venturedcloserandcloser.Dianamadeaconsciouseffortnottofrightenthem.She

calledthemtodinnerwithafortingvoice,lettingthemknowtheyweresafe.Itwas

importantthattheytrustedher.Why?Shewaslookingforsomethingtomother.For

Diana,loveisthemedicinetoeverything,（突出Diana乐于分享爱的特点）and

nothingtuggedatherheartstringsmorethanahungryandhomelessanimal.

Diananamedthem“Emma”and“Daisy”andshecalledthedogsher“little

wolves.”Initially,theywouldnotlethertouchthem.Asdaysturnedintoweeks,their

bondslowlygrew.Soon,Dianawaspet