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山东高考英语满分作文--第1页 山东高考英语满分作文 山东高考英语满分作文题目 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友 Tom 一周前给你发电子邮件， 询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他 回邮件： 1. 未及时回复的原因; 2. 你假期的打算 (如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。 注意： 1. 次数：120~150; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 山东高考英语满分作文点评 时隔一年之后重新回到“书信题”的大框架中，考了一篇“以道歉信为外衣， 以活动安排为主体段”的提纲作文，相当于 10 年山东卷 (道歉信)和 07 年四川卷 (假期安排)和合体。这种作文是我们平时经常练习的，因此套路很完善、套话很 丰富。此外，*中需要同学们翻译的难句不多，因此，只要在备考过程中有意识 地了解过高考英语作文的提分方法，掌握了常用的亮点词汇、加分句型和过渡词， 并加以针对性训练，这道题目应该不难写。 山东高考英语满分作文范文 Dear Tom, 山东高考英语满分作文--第1页 山东高考英语满分作文--第2页 How are you doing? (问候) You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the comingsummer vacation.(写信背景) I am sorry that I didnt reply without delay.(写信目的) How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. However, I was busypreparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice butto completely focus on my study. I believe that if you were me, you would make the samechoice.(第 二段为道歉信常见套路) By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.(主题句) First and foremost, Iwould do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.(拓展句 1)Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New OrientalSchool.(拓展句 2) Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teachingassistant.(拓展句 3) These are my plan for the summer vacation. Whats yours? I am looking forward to yourearliest reply.(以合理的客套话结尾) 山东高考英语满分作文--第2页