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高分作文的亮点 高级词汇和短语； 多样化的句式； 亮丽的修辞手法； 清晰的结构和层次，恰当的过渡 抢分技巧 长短句结合原则 书面表达讲究一张一弛，有时一个短小精悍的句子也可以起到画龙点睛的作用。比如，在文章开头用一长一短，尤其是先长后短；文章的主体部分先用一个短句解释意思，再用几个长句阐述要点；文章的结尾则用一长一短进行总结和呼应（与开头） 2）主题句原则 一篇文章必须要有一个主题，写作时要有个主题句，这个主题句一般放在文章开头（最保险）或/和结尾，让读者一目了然 3）一二三原则 就是叙述中必须条理清晰，一步进一步地阐述。采用高级的连接或过渡结构，比如to begin/start with, next, furthermore/in addition/ finally; first and foremost, besides, last but not least等 短语优先原则 在写作中，注意词语的魅力，坚持短语优先原则。 灵活恰当地运用介词、副词、形容词短语，为写作增加亮点 多变句式原则 避免采用单一句子结构，特别注意不要there be, and, but，then等泛滥 挑战极限原则 在考生作文中，最常见的是使用一些动词不定式，而很少看到使用现在分词完成式，不定式的完成式这些结构。至于非谓语动词的最高境界-独立主格结构，则更为少见，如果考生能适时地正确使用这样的结构，必然能得高分。 高分范文 Nowadays, there are more and more misunderstandings between parents and children which is so-called generation gap. It is estimated that 75% of parents often complain their children‘s unreasonable behavior while children usually think their parents too old-fashioned.　　Why have there been so many misunderstandings between parents and children? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.　　The first one is that the two generations have grown up at different times, thus the disagreement often rises between them. Besides, due to having little in common to talk about, they are not willing to sit face to face. The third reason is with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster, both of them can’t spare enough time to exchange ideas. To sum up, the main cause is due to lack of communication and understanding each other.　　It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, children should respect their parents. On the other hand, parents also should show solicitude for their children. All these measures will certainly bridge the generation gap. 1.随着高考的临近，一些高三学生出现各种生理和心理问题。因此，学会适度地自我放松非常重要。请你围绕“Ways to get relaxed” 这一话题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：问题类型：学习焦虑、缺乏交流、缺乏锻炼自我放松的途径：体育锻炼、谈心、阅读励志故事等我更喜欢的途径及理由：……注意：词数100-120，文章开头已给出（不计入词数）。Ways to get relaxedWith the national college entrance examination drawing near, some students in Senior Three suffer from problems both