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Description First some Review Think back to our previous lessons about writing essays. In groups of 3-4 write down a step by step process to writing an essay including different writing suggestions. Try to do this without looking at your notes. Try to keep the talk in English ? Writing Descriptions In the window was a fan. The blades of the rusty window fan clattered and whirled as they blew out a stream of warm, soggy air. Descriptive Essay Goal is to share an experience with the reader appealing to their senses. How does the last sentence about the fan appeal to the senses? Descriptive Essay Make readers see, taste, hear, smell and feel. Give the reader a mental picture. Pro essay- Intro Imagine a restaurant where your every whim is catered to, your every want satisfied, your every request granted without hesitation. The people on staff live to please you. They hover over you anxiously as you sample your selection, waiting for your judgment. Your pleasure is their delight, your dissatisfaction their dismay. Lou’s isn’t that kind of place. Question- example 1 Does the author have a thesis? Can you picture this ‘perfect restaurant’ the author describes? Pro essay- Body 1 At Lou’s Kosy Korner Koffee Shop, the mock abuse flows like a cup of spilled Folgers. Customers are yelled at, lectured, blamed, mocked, teased, and ignored. They pay for the privilege of pouring their own coffee and scrambling their own eggs. As in a fond but dysfunctional family, Lou displays his affection through criticism and insults, and his customers respond in kind. If Lou’s had a slogan, it might be, “If I’m polite to you, ask yourself what’s wrong.” Question- body 1 Does the paragraph support the thesis? Do you get a sense of how Lou treats his costumers? Pro essay- example 3 “Maaaaakeee someone happy… Make-make-maaakeeee someone happy,” he croons as he lifts the steaming pot that has infused the room with