高中英语作文教学课件.pptVIP

影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个因素： 1.语篇信息是否完整 2.行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。 3.是否使用高级词汇 4.是否使用复杂句 5 .卷面整洁,书写工整 现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。 ６５％的学生认为应该春游 ３５％的学生认为不应该春游 1．接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康 1．高考临近，没有心情玩 2．活动能放松精神，休息大脑，有利于学习 2．春游耽误学习 第一步：审题（list the outline of the writing） 体裁： 人称： 时态： 一般现在时 第三、一人称 议论文 文体： 中段： 首段： 尾段： 开门见山，指出论点 论证1：赞成及其理由 论证2：反对及其理由 作者自己的观点 三段式 Key words: 1.paragraph 1 (topic): 高三学生 去春游 讨论 2.paragraph 2 (supporting and opposing ideas and reasons): 接触自然 呼吸新鲜空气 精神放松 大脑休息 高考临近 没心情玩 耽误学习 3.paragraph 3 (the authors opinion): 以我的观点 senior 3 students go spring outing discussion be close to nature breathe some fresh air relax themselves rest their brains with college entrance examination drawing near don’t feel like going in my opinion delay learning Key words: 高中生 身体差 充足的睡眠 加强锻炼，增加户外活动 定时吃饭少吃零食 养成良好的健康习惯 high school students poor health / the health is in bad condition enough sleep take more exercise and do more outdoor activities have three meals regularly,eat less snacks . Form/develop good health habits Key sentences paragraph 1(simply introduce the topic) 1.我们就“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论 We have had a heated discussion about whether Senior 3 students should go spring outing or not. Different people have diferent opinions on the question 2.关于这个问题不同的人有不同的观点。 Paragraph 2 (state the views and reasons of both parties) Point1:正方观点 Sentence pattern: Most of us (about 65%) are in favor of the idea that… Most students, about 65%,are for the idea that... 2. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. 1.Most of us about 65%are in favor of the idea that Senior3 students should go spring outing. 65％的学生支持这个观点认为高三学生应该春游。 Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康 Sentence pattern: They think it good (for sb./sth.) to do sth… In their opinion, it is of great benefit to do sth… 1. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air. 2. In their opinion, it is of great benefit to