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PAGE1 / NUMPAGES7 2019课标版高考写作专练 写作专练(四) 写作(共两节，满分35分) 第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分) (2017～2018·郑州一中上期高三入学测试) The incident had happened on my way to a bookstore on the rainy Sunday afternoon.I was waiting for the green light when a girl about ten was knocked down by a passing car，that drove off quickly.A man immediately rushed to the girl to give him first aid.I joined in without any hesitate.A young woman called 110 and the polices soon arrived at the scene.Fortunate she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital.Comparing with the escaped driver，I am proud of that I did. 【答案】 The incident happened on my way to a bookstore on eq \o(the,\s\do10(a)) rainy Sunday afternoon.I was waiting for the green light when a girl eq \o(∧,\s\do10(of)) about ten was knocked down by a passing car，eq \o(that,\s\do10(which)) drove off quickly.A man immediately rushed to the girl to give eq \o(him,\s\do10(her)) first aid.I joined in without any eq \o(hesitate,\s\do10(hesitation)).A young woman called 110 and the eq \o(polices,\s\do10(police)) soon arrived at the scene.eq \o(Fortunate,\s\do10(Fortunately)) she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital.eq \o(Comparing,\s\do10(Compared)) with the escaped driver，I am proud of eq \o(that,\s\do10(what)) I did. 第一处：删除had。考查动词时态。此处是在叙述发生在过去的事情，故用一般过去时。 第二处：the改为a。考查冠词。此处应用不定冠词a，泛指某一个下雨的周日下午。 第三处：about前加of。考查介词。此处表示“一个大约十岁的女孩”，故在about前加of。 第四处：that改为which。考查定语从句。which引导非限制性定语从句，在从句中作主语，先行词为“a passing car”。 第五处：him改为her。考查代词。根据语境可知，此处是指上文提到的被车撞倒的小姑娘，故用代词her。 第六处：hesitate改为hesitation。考查名词。根据空前的any可知，此处应用名词作宾语，故将hesitate改为hesitation。 第七处：polices改为police。考查名词。the police表示“警察”，是表示复数意义的集体名词。 第八处：Fortunate改为Fortunately。考查副词。副词修饰动词、形容词、副词或整个句子。故用副词Fortunately修饰整个句子。 第九处：Comparing改为Compared。考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，compare和句子主语“I”构成逻辑上的动宾关系，故用过去分词作状语。 第十处：that改为what。考查宾语从句。what引导宾语从句，在从句中作宾语，表示物的概念；that在宾语从句中不作成分，故将that改为what。 第二节　书面表达(满分25分) (2018·山西名校联考) 假定你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Dave想了解中国的传统节日“春节”，请你回复他的电子邮件，介绍“春节”及这个节日里的主要活动。 1．它