小作文总结版.docxVIP

小作文拿到题目要做什么？对象词（分子分母法）分子accounted for 分母（什么东西是什么东西的一部分）错误：The proportion of the spending on insurance accounted for 2% of the school’s total expenditure更正：The spending on insurance accounted for 2% of the school’s total expenditure The proportion of 分子The proportion of the spending on insurance was loweset(2%)数字 of 分母2% of the school’s spending was on insurance错误：insurance was around 2% of the school’s spending更正：insurance accounted for 2% of the school’s spending insurance was around 2% of the school’s spending时态总结 overview确定最主要的信息主体部分一定要分段(单图按对象分，多图单位一致就当单图来看)开头段Show/present information about （动/静）Show/illustrate the changes in…(动)Show the differences between…in…(动/静)Compare…in terms of …(动/静)不能用过去时态，要用一般现在时不要用picture这个单词不要用什么倒装，譬如说given is the chart showing that…结尾段动态图的结尾段总结趋势的对比，很有可能用while这个词。静态图的结尾段总结最高值。不要总结所有的信息，选择你认为最重要的信息（一般是2——3个）不要出现数据。动态图：三大原则注意趋势（上升、下降、保持不变）注意最高值一般不需要比较，除非排列有规律动态作文的6个必备句式必备句式1：分词结构1. 电力供应差不多增长两倍（double），从50 涨到100。Electricity supply nearly doubled, rising from 50 to 100.2. 开荒（land clearance）是土地退化（degradation）的主要原因，占据了10%。Land clearance was the main reason for degradation, accounting for 10%.3. 人口上升到61亿在2005，在2006年轻微下降到60亿之前。The population rose to 6.1 billion in 2005, before declining slightly to 6 billion in 2006.必备句式2：用while, 或者although引导的状语从句，或者是but引导的并列句1.结婚的数字上升，而离婚的数字下降。The number of marriages rose, while the number of divorces dropped.2.虽然读科学的男生比女生要多，这个数字在下降。Although men outnumbered women in science, this number declined.必备句式3：用after which, during which time, by which time, when, where 引导的定语从句1.手机用户的数量在2005上升到2百万，在那之后数字保持水平。The number of mobile phone users rose to 2 million in 2005, after which the figure remained constant.2. 这个趋势一直保持到2005，在那一年，离婚人数显著上升。The trend continued until 2005, when the number of divorces rose markedly.必备句式4：使用倍数1. 老年人的百分比在2005年是1955年的3倍（15% 相比5%）。正确的答案：1： The proportion of elderly people in 2005 was three times the figure in 1955 (15% versus 5%)正确的答案：2：The proportion of elderly people in 2005 was 15%，three