专题+书面表达++(上)--讲义.doc

书面表达 (上) 评分基本情况 15分；（13-15；9-12；5-8；0-4） 阅卷原则：先定档，再定分。 目标：一档文 第一档（13－15分） 信息完整，结构清晰， 行文流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 失分原因跑题---审题不认真 要点不全---审题不仔细 结构乱：一段到底 or 随意分段 错误---单词拼错，词性选错，人称时态用错…… 书写---字迹潦草, 随意勾抹, 没有间隔…… 命题体裁 议论文 个人观点看法/建议；利弊文, 表格文 叙议结合[来源:学|科|网Z|X|X|K] 叙述（事/人）+感想/建议 应用文 写信/ e-mail；推荐信；演讲稿；通知 写作要求 叙：全面，清楚。（人，地点，时间，事件等） 议：观点正确，符合核心价值观, 关键词到位 建议要有针对性，充分,实用 分段意识，语言准确多样 利弊文 假如你是某中学初三（1）班班长李华， 请你为校报“英语园地”写一篇短文；记述前天主题班会“To be sent to school or not”的讨论情况。 内容要点： 1.部分学生认为上学应该接送，省时又安全。 2.部分学生认为步行或骑自行车是最好的方式，环保又健身。 3.你的看法和建议。 注意: 1.词数：80-100； 2.可是当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不要出现真实校名和人名。 利弊文结构第一段：点明主题，简述观点趋向 第二段：好处加原因 第三段：弊端加原因 第四段：个人看法/建议加总结 Useful expressions Paragraph One : Nowadays, it is common to ….However, opinions are divided on this. Paragraph Two : Many students believe it is good/beneficial to …, because …. Besides, …. Useful expressions Paragraph Three： However, just like every coin has two sides, other students think… also has its own disadvantages, such as …. The last Paragraph: One the whole, I believe that …has more… So I advise/ hope that everyone should (not)… Writing Sample Nowadays, it is common for the students to be sent to school. We had a discussion about whether it is good or not. However, opinions are divided on this. Some students think it is beneficial to be sent to school, because it can save their time. Besides, parents can make sure the students are safe, especially when the weather is terrible. However, just like every coin has two sides, other students think it also has its own disadvantages, such as the heavy traffic and the polluted air in our city, so they think going to school on foot or by bike is the best way. First of all, walking or riding to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it’s good for our health. What’s more, more walking and less driving help make our city cleaner. The streets won’t be as crowded as they are now.[来源:学科网ZXXK] On the whole, I believe that being sent to school has more disadvantages, so I hope m