lecture 1英语写作中的遣词、造句及句子润色文库.pptVIP

* * 插入语的作用主要有两个： 一个是突出主语，比如说： He, who would like to play basketball, is a good student. 第二个作用是解释说明，比如说： People, especially students, should work hard. * Internet, the most pervasive modern technology, which has penetrated into people‘s lives a decade ago (which has marked rapid change and innovation in the means of communication), has great impact on both our life-style and our thought. 网络是最普遍的现代技术，它十年前就进入我们的生活，它对我们的生活方式和思维都有很大的影响。 * （2）inversion 倒装 　　倒装是我们写作中需要用到的。虽然略显俗套，但是却是很能满足阅卷人的主观感受的。 常用的倒装形式有以下几种： ??????? Only + 时间状语? Only when all of us join in the efforts of eliminating cheating at all levels can we expect to have a cleaner society and a more beautiful future. ?????? Only + 介词词组???? Only by planning his time carefully can he improve efficiency and make achievements. Only in this way can we master the writing skills step by steps. ?????? * ? 否定词位于句首（hardly when; never; not only---,but also---; seldom）? 在我一生当中很难遇到这样的人 ?Seldom in my life have I met such a kind-hearted man.? ?地点方位名词位于句首 In no other place in the world can one find such enthusiasm for applying for hosting the 2008 Olympic Games. * Follow-up Exercise: Use inversion in sentence-making 充满着风险与机遇的改革的新时代正向我们走来. Now on coming to us is the new era of reform full of ventures and chances。 * 3、figure of speech 修辞 　　无论是汉语写作还是英语写作，修辞其实非常的重要。它是作者写作功底具体事例的展现。所谓修辞包括比喻、拟人、排比等等。这里仅举一个比喻例子，还是拿“重要的”来举例。当你用完词组之后，如果你用上下面句子，则文章就会显得神采飞扬呢？ Most students will put it in that way: 　　 The bicycle is important for us. The bicycle is of importance for us. The bicycle plays an important role in our life. Now can you upgrade the sentence？ * 用同位语（上义词）做插入语进行改造 2. 用修辞，比如比喻改造 The bicycle, environmental friendliness vehicle, plays an important role in our life. The bicycle is like the air, water, and sunshine and cannot be parted with a moment in our life. 　 parenthesis Simile 明喻 the air, water, and sunshine * 四六级、雅思写作中常见修辞1 结合四六级写作考试来看，大家经常喜欢表达这样一句话：A对B很重要。那么这样一句看似天真无邪的话用英语怎么表达呢？ 对，没错，遥远的地方传来了一声A is im