高三作文写作训练.ppt

高三作文写作训练 简阳市阳安中学 1、写作内容 假设是李华。你有一段没有给新西兰笔友Eric写信了。Eric刚刚来信询问你的近况，请根据以下内容给他写一封回信： 表示歉意。 说明原因：刚刚升入高三，学业繁忙； 目标：考入理想的大学。 注意： 1.词数100左右。 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.信的开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Eric, I was excited to receive your letter this morning.________________________________ 范文欣赏 Dear Eric, I was excited to receive your letter this morning. I’m very happy to know that everything is going well for you. I must apologize for not writing to you for so long. You know, I moved up to Senior Three this autumn. So I have been busy with school these days. Life is stressful for me with many exercises and exam papers to do every. I have been studying hard in order to get admitted to the university I have always dreamed of. No pain, no gain. I am feeling pretty hopeful about the future. With all my best wishes. yours sincerely, Li Hua * 唐亨禄 审题 体裁: 时态: 人称: 要点: 记叙文 现在时 第一人称 (1)收信后的话语。 (2)对很长一段时间未给你写信表示歉意。 (3)刚刚高三，学业繁忙。 (4)努力学习，考入自己理想的大学。 (5)合理的结尾。 句型短语 (1) Everything is well for you be fine be OK be pleased/glad to do 收信后的话语。 句型短语 (2) 对很长时间没有给你写信表示歉意 make an apology to sb for sth apologize to sb for sth say sorry to sb for sth/doing sth write to sb write a letter to sb for a long time for so long (3) 刚刚高三，学业繁忙。 a student of Senior Three be busy with my study be busy in studying (4)努力学习，考入自己理想的大学。 句型短语 study hard be admitted into get the permission into a university that I am dreaming of (5)合理的结尾。 句型短语 look forward to your early reply hope to receive your letter *