针对九年级几次作文问题的分析和改进建议.pptVIP

大作文 Hugh C.Wang 22-12-2015 中西思维对比图 中式螺旋式思维，绕圈绕到中心。 西式线性思维，（一般）开始即给出主题。 按线性思维写作示意图 Title Topic Body Conclusion Say what you’ll say. （1）主题句（Topic Sentence） 写主题句的诀窍是针对题目想出一个关键性的形容词、名词或副词。比如写“在我们学校有一个图书馆，我们从里面借书……”就缺乏重点，很难展开。如果写“在我们学校我最喜欢的地方就是图书馆，”有了关键词“最喜欢的”，接下来便可以写为什么。 Say it. （2）发展句 写主题句下面的每一句发展句都必须问自己它与主题句有何关系，以上段为例，每个发展句都必须用来说明老师最喜欢的理由，陈述理由时可以举例。 范例片段 My favorite place in school is the fantastic library from which I borrow books. In a quiet reading room, I can better focus on what I learn. Besides, her are all kinds of books,… （当然如果你写不出什么，或者想写的“太多”，就说明你找出那个“关键词”并不是你真正的可以写出作文关键词，那你就得换主题句或关键词了。） Say what you have said. （3）结论句（Conclusion） 举例之后就可以写结论句了。结论句与主题句息息相关，可以说是主题句的另一种表现。比如还是上面的例子，结尾就可以写成“The library is really a wonderful place to study school work and to expand my knowledge. Sometimes I can even make new friends who loves reading too.” 四种文体（记叙文、说明文、议论文、描述文）简介 记叙文 用以解说一个故事或事件。包括真实或虚幻的故事。 叙述故事时，也要描写。 记叙文写的是在特定情况下发生的实践及体验。 I find Chinese folk music, Jessamine (Moli Flower)to be my favorite music. It was made by the Chinese people and at the beginning of 20th century it was the first piece introduced to Western world by Italian composer ?Puccini. In 1920, Puccini found the music when he listen to the music box of his ambassador friend’s(大使朋友). Then he put the music in to his opera Turandot(图兰朵）.Since then, Jessamine has been known all over the world. As a national and international piece of music, Jessamine can be loved by people always. NarrativeStyle My Favorite Music 议论文 是作者根据事实针对某个方面发表自己的见解看法，起说服作用的一种写作方法。 夹叙夹议 叙述（熟悉的）生活片段、细节，但要求对其进行一定的思考、评述和分析，即要对叙述的事情发表自己的看法。 I find Chinese folk music, Jessamine (Moli Flower)to be my favorite music. I like it because the music is strangely beautiful. When I listen to it, I sense a strong joy and courage, imagining I came back to my childhood and enjoyed myself among the beautiful Jessamine flowers. It was made by the Chinese