(书面表达部分)2013-2014学年度 海淀区高三年级第二学期期末练习试卷讲评PPT.ppt

2013-2014学年度高三英语; 四、书面表达（2013）; 四、书面表达（2014）; 应用文分类-书信; 应用文分类-通知; 应用文分类-其它; 应用文分类;假如你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，你参加高校招生英语面试，请根据以下提示用英语做自我介绍。 1. 兴趣爱好：篮球、音乐； 2. 擅长科目：英语； 3. 未来专业意向。 注意：1. 词数不少于50； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ;Good morning! I’m Li Hua from Hong Xing High school. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you. ;评 分 原 则;评分标准;第二档：9---12分 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 内容、条理和交际等方面基本符合要求； 所用语法和词汇满足了任务的要求； 语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。 基本达到了预期的写作目的。 要点基本齐全，条理尚清，错误不影响理解。;第三档：4---8分 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 内容不完整； 所用词汇有限，语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解。 未能清楚地传达信息。 要点不全，欠缺条理，错误使人误解 （词不达意）。;第四档：1---3分 未完成试题规定的任务。 写了少量相关信息； 语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对所写内容的理解。 少许要点，无条理，错误多不知所云。;0分： 未能传达任何信息；所写内容与要求无关。 ;内容要点;重点表达;重点表达;重点表达;Good morning! I’m Li Hua from Hongxing Middle School. I’d like to give a brief introduction about myself. I’m easy going and have various hobbies. I love sports, especially playing basketball with my friends. I’m also keen on listening to music to relax myself in my spare time. Among all the subjects, English is my favorite and I’m good at it. When it comes to my ideal major, I’m quite interested in international business because I like meeting people from different cultures and communicating with them in English. I sincerely hope that you can give me a chance to improve myself in your university.? That’s all. Thank you.;Good morning! I’m Li Hua from Hongxing Middle School. I’d like to give a brief introduction about myself.(交际) I’m easy going and have various hobbies. I love sports, especially playing basketball with my friends. I’m also keen on listening to music to relax myself in my spare time. Among all the subjects, English is my favorite and I’m good at it. When it comes to my ideal major, I’m quite interested in international business because I l