人教版高中英语必修一unit1 writing 高中写作第一步 课件.pptVIP

Made by Echo Friendship Unit1 Writing 建议信 Made by Echo 表看法： 1.I think/ believe/consider that… 2.As far as I am concerned, 3.In my opinion依我看来 Made by Echo 表建议： 1.I would like to suggest that… 2. If I were you, I would … 3. It seems to me that you could… 4. I think it would be more beneficial if you could … 5. I believe you will take my advice into account. Made by Echo 衔接: 1.To begin with,…and then…besides, …,what’s more,… 2.Firstly,… secondly, …thirdly,… ,finally,… 3.On one hand, …on the other hand,… Made by Echo upset ignore recover settle have got to go through calm(…)down a series of in order to be concerned about face to face suffer from get along with join in Words and expressions in unit 1 Made by Echo 1. sb. find it +adj. + to do sth. 2. While +doing sth,… 重点句式： 步骤 1.仔细审题，抓住要点。弄清楚对方需要哪些方面的帮助，同时审题时要注意文章的人称，判断文章应该用什么时态。 2.列提纲，分清段落，理清要点。建议全文写三段 （1）首段表明写作意图。 （2）主体段落提出具体的建议内容并简要论述。 （3）结尾段总结观点，呼应主题，并提出希望。 3.译写单句。在译写单句时尽量把长句子和短句子结合使用，同时适当的用到一些短语，高级词汇和较丰富的句式等。 4.连句成篇。充分考虑句子的逻辑关系，选用合适的连接词。 5.检查润色。从句子的逻辑关系上，短语，句型使用上，语言的运用方面进行检查润色。 6.定稿誊写。注意书写规范，认真，清楚。 Made by Echo 【写作】假如你是李华，你的朋友Mary 写信向你诉苦，在新的寄宿学校没有好朋友，且遭到同学的误解，没有可以谈心的伙伴，心情低落。请你根据下表的提示写一封100词左右的信。文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 1.审题 时态 要点 Made by Echo Dear Mary, You told me that you were upset these days for you were misunderstood by some classmates and didn’t have any friends in the new school. ______________________________________________________ I hope my advice will be helpful and you can make some friends successfully soon. Yours, Li Hua Made by Echo +-********************- 你的看法：要尽快恢复心情，努力改变现状，因为朋友和友谊在新的环境中显得尤其重要。 你的建议：找机会参与大家的讨论以了解彼此共同的爱好，刚开始可能会遇到困难； 倾听别人讲话时通过问问题显示你对话题感兴趣； 主动帮助同学，分担别人的悲伤和痛苦； 与误解你的同学进行一次面对面的交谈，解开矛盾。 结论： 只要你努力尝试与人友好相处，一定可以交到很多朋友。 1.恢复：Recover (from…); recover oneself 2.努力：Make an effort; try/do one’s best