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大学英语作文错误分析 19. The Qualities of the Teacher I’m a student in a Normal University. (1)I’ll become a teacher in the future. But there are some necessary qualities to be a teacher(2). Firstly, you must love your career. Because if you don’t have interest in teaching students, you’ll have no motivate and enthusiastic (3)to do it. You will always complain your work (4)and get tired of it. Secondly, you should be capable of great patience(5). This is largely a matter of self-training. It makes great demands on nervous energy to teach students. (6)We must have patience with students when they make mistakes. Finally, teachers should communicate with students constantly. Without communication with each other, we can’t understand what they (7)are thinking (8)and how we can help them catch up with good-study (9)students or get out (10)the shadow. As for me, I’ll try my best to teach students and to be a good teacher. 点评：本文整体结构清晰，前后连贯，表达思想清楚。但存在一些细节问题，如 1.单词大小写错误（划线1：在这句话中，normal 和university不是专有名词，不应该大写）。2.单词词性使用错误（划线3 ：no 后面应该接名词，而motivate和enthusiastic分别为动词和形容词，应该改为motivation, enthusiasm）。 3. 中式英语错误。受到汉语思维的影响，本文出现多处中式英语。（划线2: “to be a teacher”的主语应该是人，不能用there be结构，此句应改为But I know one needs some necessary qualities to become a teacher；划线5：应该是“具有”耐心，不是“会”耐心，故应改为have great patience; 划线9：成绩好的学生，直接说good students即可;另外划线6也是中式英语，表达不地道） 4. 搭配错误（划线4：complain是不及物动词，只有先接介词about后才能接宾语；划线8：thinking后面也应该接介词about; 划线10：固定搭配get out of，意为“走出…”，介词of不能省略） 5．代词使用错误（划线7：they指向不明确，应该改为the poor-performing students） （点评老师：张继光） 20.Should Private Cars Be Encouraged in China? With the development of economy, more and more people have private car (1). In our country—China, a developing country, there are also more and more people have their own car (2). It (3)causes an argument among people. Some people think it is good that so many people have private car. It indicates