专题复习：书面表达训练之一如何使句子优美.pptVIP

专题复习：书面表达训练之一如何使句子优美　　　　;词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）;句式多变化 作文更优美; 怎样用不同的表达方式表示相同的意义 怎样通过对句子结构的变化,使文章显得更加丰富多彩 怎样运用高级词汇，给文章增加亮点;;2.The man didnt know what he should do next. =The man didnt know _____ ____ ______ next. ;4.Too many people to the zoo will cause traffic jam . Too many people to the zoo will ____ _____ traffic jam . Too many people to the zoo will _____ _____ traffic jam . ; ;6.这本书是如此的有趣，以致于我读了一遍又一遍。 1)________________________________ 2)________________________________ 3)_________________________________ 4)________________________________;7.The teacher took a book in his hand and came into the classroom. = The teacher came into the classroom, ____ ____ ____ ____ ____ ____ ． 　(用with的复合结构) ＝ The teacher came into the classroom, _____ ______ _____. （用独立结构）;把其中一句改为分词短语 He had finished supper. He went out to have a walk then. ;2. 把其中一句改为介词短语 He was brought in. His hands were tied behind his back. ; B. 合并为复合句 The Chinese artists were to perform here that night. The news cheered everyone of us.;2 In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast. All these make people’s lives convenient, pleasant and colorful. which ;With the development of so that ;C. 把复合句改为简单句;C. 把复合句改为简单句;在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等. ;在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等. ;As soon as we arrived at the village, we were warmly welcomed by the villagers.;We were warmly welcomed by the villagers immediately we arrived at the village.;句子开头的变化;2.I didnt realize my mistake until you pointed it out. → = ________not until you pointed it out _____I realized my mistake.(强调句型） = _________you pointed it out