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官方范文Issue部分 SAMPLE 1Both the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them have created modern civilizations in which loneliness is ever increasing.题目分析：1，关键词： technological tools, uses, loneliness2，限定词： both, development, modern civilizations, ever increasing3，逻辑类型： is 型关键词：告诉你这篇文章让你写些什么，抓住了，你的文章大的思路就正确了。限定词：这是将文章写“准”的基本前提，有的题目比较长，题目本身就有限定词，比如这道题。但有的题目很短，这样就增加了难度，因为需要你自己去给他限定，不然就会写的很宽泛，这和写论文一个思路，如果要写的准写的有深度，宽泛便是大忌，这样的题目范文里也有，后期我会详细说明。逻辑类型：这个是最最重要，也是最最容易被大家搞不清楚的，而不幸的是，如果这里没有把握准确，文章则会全盘皆输，成功进入答非所问的境界，rater边看边说，wow，what are you talking about? 这样就有些尴尬了。Ok ,关于这三点具体在本文的体现，我会在文后详细说明，不在这里说，是为了不影响大家的思路，大家看文章的时候先自己体会。在文章中寻找这三点，也许你会有比我更深刻的发现。请先不要翻到后面看，自己对文章有个整体的把握是理解的前提。Technology, broadly defined as the use of tools, has a long history. Ever since Erg the caveman first conked an animal with a rock, people have been using technology. For thousands of years, the use of tools allowed people to move ever closer together. Because fields could be cultivated and the technology to store food existed, people would live in cities rather than in small nomadic tribes. Only very lately have Ergs descendants come to question the benefits of technology. The Industrial Revolution introduced and spread technologies that mechanized many tasks. As a result of the drive toward more efficient production and distribution (so the ever larger cities would be supported), people began to act as cogs in the technological machine. Clothing was no longer produced by groups of women sewing and gossiping together, but by down-trodden automations operating machinery in grim factories.我标出的这些并不是什么好词好句，当然我不否认写的很精彩，但是我标出来的在于强调他们题目中关键词和限定词的完美回应。至于是如何对应的，这里我先不详细指明了，大家自己想一想。The benefits of the new technology of today, computers and the internet, are particularly ambiguous. They have made work ever more efficient and knit the world together in a web of information and phone lines. Some visionaries speak of a world in which Erg need not check in to his office; he can just dial in fr