作文has science made us lazy.pptVIP

 composition 批驳型作文 常用句型 Some people believe/ state/ claim that… Some people are of the opinion that… It is generally/ widely accepted/ argued/ held that… This is unlikely to be true. They would seem to be mistaken. These views are open to doubt. Serious doubts can be raised against this. Given this, it can/ may be inferred/ concluded/ deduced that… structure People’s views/ ideas/ opinions on … vary from person to person. Some people think that … They hold this opinion because… However, others hold that… As to me/ in my opinion/ as far as I am concerned, I am in favour of the idea. The following are the reasons of / for my choice/ personal inclination./ The reasons are as follows. First/ To begin with, while it is true that, it doesn’t mean that… Second/Besides/ In addition/ Furthermore, Admittedly, Generally speaking…Finally, Most important of all, On the contrary… By contrast… Therefore/ In conclusion,… Through above analysis, I believe that advantages/ aspects outweigh the disadvantages/negative ones. Consequently,… 阅卷的标准 满分15分。5等：2分、5分、8分、11分和14分。 2分：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子都有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分：基本切题，表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。 8分：基本切题，有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 11分: 切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 Has Science Made Us Lazy? 1.科学技术的发展对现代人生活产生了巨大的影响 2 有人认为科学使人变懒了 3 你的观点（最主要的部分） 1.科学技术的发展对现代人生活产生了巨大的影响 Science and technology has immeasurable impact on human life. Thanks to numerous innovations and inventions man is capable of doing many things which they would never have thought of in the past. Actually science has not only changed our life style but also transformed our way of thinking. 2 有人认为科学使人变懒了 The development of science and technology has provided great convenience and comfort, but some people are worried that science has made man lazier. They cite TV, automobiles, Internet and so on as proof. For example, TV makes people unwilling to leave home for the theatre; automobiles deprive people